So the real story, by all means, has come about, and it appears to work very well. It doesn't much compare with the first story, but it is much better organized.
I don't find the story of Conner, Gail, Brandon, Leila, Kate, Sarah and others anywhere near as compelling as that of Lily Grace, Erin, Eric, Charles, Nell and the others.I think even many of the conversations and sequences are just ineffective, especially in the conversations between Janice and whoever. It draws too near to direct quoting, which is unfortunate.
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